上海2024年高考英语满分作文
上海2024年高考英语满分作文
无论是在学校还是在社会中，许多人都写过作文吧，作文是从内部言语向外部言语的过渡，即从经过压缩的简要的、自己能明白的语言，向开展的、具有规范语法结构的、能为他人所理解的外部语言形式的转化。那么一般作文是怎么写的呢？以下是小编精心整理的上海2024年高考英语满分作文，仅供参考，大家一起来看看吧。
【真题再现】
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：
1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;
2. 说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)
【点评解析】
今年英语作文话题贴近生活，考生应该有话可说，但要写好，不仅要有一定的语言功底，还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆有所了解，否则话语会比较表面化。这样的命题对英语教学有较好的导向作用，即学校和家庭要努力提供机会让孩子走出课堂，走向社会。
如何写整体框架:
考生认真审题后，作文时开章明义，用一句主题句明确自己的选择(如选择社区图书馆或博物馆)，然后另起两段分别就便利性和专业性进行比较，笔墨应重点放在你所选择的地点的优势方面，结尾部分稍作总结，呼应开头的选择。
作文范文1
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.
On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city. Visitors can go there by subway,by bus and so on. What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmentto appreciate the famous paintings.
On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions. What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.
Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.
Yours,
Wang Min
作文范文2
Recently, having been delighted to see the notice that there is a need of our reading festival to make a choice among three creative pictures for advertisement. After a long time comparison, the picture on the bottom right corner earns my favor.
As is clearly depicted in the picture, there sits a foreigner in front of the library who is concentrating on the books, immersing himself into the world of literature and feeling peaceful and satisfied, which turns out to be thought-provoking and enlightening.
Part of the reasons for my choice is that it vividly reveals the significance of reading books to students, which provides you with the power to escape from the hustle and bustle in the metropolis. For instance, whenever you feel puzzled, confused or stressed, you can always refer to books and consequently find peace and satisfactory solutions in them.
I’d, however, perfectly appreciate your considering my selection if you feel that choice and reason are in lined with your requirements and best wishes for your reading festival.
作文范文3
Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.
On the whole, these books have many advantages. First of all, the topics in the textbooks are various, most of which are focused on students’ life. What’s more, the pictures in the textbooks are so colorful and vivid that we can have a better understanding of the knowledge in it. What is the most important thing for the textbooks is that they can develop students’ interest in learning English.
However, some vocabularies in the textbooks are too difficult for us to understand. I hope you can change them into easier ones so that we can learn English better.
Best regards,
Li Hua
作文范文4
News came that our school will organize a shot walking tour to explore Shanghai on 1st May in the afternoon. The route starts from People’s Square, via East NanjingRoad, and ends at the Bund, and then return the same way. This is a greatactivity, while there may be some room for improvement. First,1st May is not the best time. It is a vacation when many people will come to visit the city.
Crowded and noisy, push and squeeze, all of that will prevent the tour from being a great memory. Second, the route does not cover some most glamorous parts of the as it is that the Bund best symbolizes the city’s inclusiveness of eastern and western culture. Lujiazui,one of the economic and financial centers in the world, should definitely onthe route. To conclude, it would be much better, if the plan could avoid the vacation and upgrade the route.
作文范文5
What a pleasant surprise it is to know that our school will hold a Reading Festival! Hearing that the committee need select a picture as the publicity photo, I intend to voice my opinion that I am fond of the one on the left corner.
Actually, the three photos are equally attractive to us students. If we must elect one to publicize, I prefer the one that is composed of books, coffee, musical notes and instrument, which creates the an agreeable and relaxed atmosphere.
“Read a good book, just like a noble people in conversation.”, which is said by Gerd, reveals that books play an essential role in our life. Creating an atmosphere by music and coffee，it appeals to students to start reading. Moreover, the image could imply that reading has the function of nurturing spirituality and purifying mind.
I hope that my suggestions will prove of some value in your consideration, and that reading books will be more popular among us students.
